DRAMA- Revolting Rhymes - Lesson 5 Writing a Revolting Rhyme-
Example 1 : Cinderella
Resource to watch for ideas https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MtXGmnR9F5Y
The Ugly Sisters, jewels and all,
Departed for the Palace Ball,
While darling little Cinderella
Was locked up in a slimy cellar,
Where rats who wanted things to eat,
Began to nibble at her feet.
New lines
1. cindrella is in pain
2. not to mention in pure vain
3.thankfully, she's nearly dead
4. since the queen will cut her head
5.her sisters watched her cry
6. hoped that she would finally die
Example 2: Little Red Riding Hood and the Wolf
Resource to watch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3uVQIhSYfY
As soon as Wolf began to feel
That he would like a decent meal,
He went and knocked on Grandma's door.
When Grandma opened it, she saw
The sharp white teeth, the horrid grin,
And Wolfie said, ``May I come in?''
Poor Grandmamma was terrified,
He's going to eat me up!'' she cried.
New lines
1.the wolf Is about to have dinner
2.he cooked her up so she'd simmer
3.the wolf said "ooo some good meat"
4. as he glared "what a plate so neat"
5. immedaltley grandmas dead
6. red wondering why she not in bed?
Activity 3:
Chose one of the examples you completed to practice and perform; applying expression and rhythm. Skills of the the artform
Reflection: against the lesson outcomes record considering the questions below?
1.What does the term artform mean? Art form is the type of art your referring to like now we are referring to is revolting rhymes in total its the type of art
2.What is your Knowledge now of how to write rhyming verses (using literacy devices, imagination vocabulary etc.) ryming verses mostly have to be on beat and same sylables that ryme
3. Creativity- how did you show creativity- what is you refer to use (imagination, knowledge of story, use of humor) I used dark imaginative great humor that's funny but dark
What went well (WWW) we improved are lines and worked well together
Even better if (EBI) maybe we could've fixed the amount of syllables a bit more
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